My favourite part of the Immersion Assembly was when Mr Barks very carefully carried out his hovercraft . His hovercraft was made successfully out of plywood, plastic, some day I will ride that hovercraft.
After the Immersion Assembly everyone in the school went to class to learn about new thing. I hope I will know new thing to at class
that was a really awesome Immersion Assembly and I hope that the school will do it again. tinkering tools and toys will be really fun to do.
You have done a great job Awathan with this writing about our immersion assembly. I like that you have tried to use some interesting vocab and tried to include complex sentences. Can you just spot 2 little things you need to fix in your last paragraph?
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