Writing Test

Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.

It was a cold windy day everyone inside nobody came out because it was so cold that snow even came down from the sky. One cold day there was a man his name was Sam he had a brother and his name was Jack. Sam and Jack were brave men that they want to go on a hike or swim in the sea. They lived in a little farm with their mum and dad and their little black and white dog.

One night Sam and Jack got their lifejacket and their kayak ready to go to the dangerous creeks it had eels and shark and even jellyfish. Padding in creek dog were howling in the night  Jack was starting to get scared he want to go back home. Suddenly Jack and Sam

started to stop they could hear something from underneath. Suddenly something came out underneath the kayak and SNAP! A Shark bite Sam's kayak in half kayak. Pieces of the kayak started to float down the river. Jack was screaming for help but no-one was around to save him except Sam.

Jack started hitting the shark with his paddle. Sam started to swim over to Jack and then jumped into the kayak. Paddling as fast as he could away from the shark. After paddling for awhile they finally got to an island. Both Sam and Jack were breathing very loud and were very tired but they were safe.   

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Wheelbarrow race

WALT: write an interesting recount by writing about our feelings and the feelings of others.

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

was walking to class excited what we were going to do. When I got to class I saw a wheelbarrow in the class that is strange?  When Mrs Baxindine our literacy teacher.

During the race people were falling on the ground and laughing. But some people just kept going and and never gave up at all. I got to the finish line 2nd.  



The race had finished But there were some really bad thing that had just happen. There were people who used wheels to cheat and win I felt so so angry and cross. I felt frustrated and disappointed and mad. It was not fair because they get to use a wheelbarrow and that is cheating.

Wheelbarrow race

WALT: write an interesting recount by writing about our feelings and the feelings of others.

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

was walking to class excited what we were going to do. When I got to class I saw a wheelbarrow in the class that is strange?  When Mrs Baxindine our literacy teacher.

During the race people were falling on the ground and laughing. But some people just kept going and and never gave up at all. lo I got to the finish line 2nd.  



The race had finished But there were some really bad thing that had just happen. There were people who used wheels to cheat and win I felt so so angry and cross. I felt frustrated and disappointed and mad. It was not fair because they get to use a wheelbarrow and that is cheating.

Awathan Lean O Meter

WINING GOLD!!!!! part 1

  I am in Rio in 2016 I am standing on the podam. I can see my family cheering for me and my friends and people. there screaming crying
Cameras, smoke it was so beautiful. At last there was the  medal I been waiting

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My NZ moscot

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The Egg Race!

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Awathan Carrots

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: write a recount.

On Monday I came in class suddenly I saw carrot some plate but there is no rabbit. Then I saw Mr Baxendine with a smile on his face.x

We had to make a friend out of a carrots that looks easy I couldn't wait. When we had to make our little we had to use knifes, a board, and design it, and the main thing was carrots. But the  worse thing was I hurt myself.


My highlight of the day was making my carrots.

Paul Martin visit

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: Write a recount.

On a cold wednesday I walked to class. Suddenly I just remembered Paul Martin was going to come to school all the way from I couldn’t wait.

When Paul Martin came to see team 4 he told us how to draw people facing left, right, and running.

At the end Paul Martin gave out his books.

My favorite part of Paul Martin visit was him telling his adventure of making his very first book.

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My Super Hero

There was kid named Ben. He lives in canada where there is sown. One day he was doing some science in a room he put in some position in a cup a and played the drums. Suddenly position the turned into gum that can poison human then he got power to protect the world. With his  power he can defeat the evil that try to make bad decision. When he knew that he had power he was thinking about make a costume he made a cape and glass adds a belt, tight , amour. Now he will call himself  Captain Defender

Repaying Kindness

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Iron man descriptions

Iron man is a  brave guy who fight super villains with his strong armour.

He was a very brave and happy friendly friend.

His hair was black short and soft.

The suit was made out of melt that was red yellow black blue grey .

He was a tall person but not muscled he has a blue heart.

His can fly super fast he can lift up heavy thing he shots laser and has powerful guns  

Awathan comic

          we have been learning about comic. This is my comic