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Tuesday, 13 June 2017

Kayak Jingles

Walt: make connections with what we already know with what we read.

Task description : I had to write a song to make people kayak.  

Wednesday, 7 June 2017

My kayak



Walt: make connections with what we already know with what we read.


I have chosen a blue SLALOM K1 which has a heart in the middle in the front I put a fist. Three stips are are by the side and a little stairs on the


I think this kayak is would be liked by art set that could be interested in kayak. The art is good.

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Friday, 2 June 2017

my waka

Maori Fishing

Food review


Walt: express our personal opinions.

To the chocolate lovers this is one of the best chocolate in my life you should try it every single night.

My chocolate was from canterbury. It was favoured crunchy caramel it was a good size to put one whole piece in the mouth. It cost  $3.99 that is a good prize because there are quite a lot of chocolate pieces inside on whole pocket.   

The chocolate was nice and smooth. It was like it had two favours in one it was like hokey pokey but it wasn’t.  When I felt it was really smooth and it was in a square shape as well. It doesn't smell sweet at all and small like milk chocolate.

This chocolate can be better when out something the doesn't make small animals eat the chocolate. Make the shape better and make it healthy.

I think people should eat this every day and I vote this crunchy caramel 9.99 out of 10.

Dear Diary

Walt: think critically about what we read.

Tuesday, 23 May 2017

Maths Practice


this is the mark I got this week.

Task description: I had to do a  math test 

Travel Past vs Present

Walt: think critically about what we read.

 
task description; I wrote something that would happen in the past and now.

Thursday, 18 May 2017

Castaway

Walt: Write from the 1st person.

Waking up on the sand in pooped raft in a island in the middle of nowhere. I is this a dream I say to myself This is not a dream this is real I was devastated I wanted to go back home but I couldn't so I started to look around to see if there was anybody around. I started to call out help but there was no one around, I am lonely.   


I need shelter so I started to look around to see if there was something to use. I found stick big stick so I pick them up and started to find a building stop then I found a spot with lots of trees.
So I found some palm trees and started to pick the fronds for the top bit of my shelter


Suddenly I  got a bit hungry and wanted to eat. Then I went to find a coconut tree but I found fresh water that I can't drink it was cold which isn't good. I tried to find fish but there was none in the sea. Then I Tried to find some animals the walk on land but there wasn’t at all But I found some berries that ants ate so I  threw them away into the sea. Then I found a whole bunch of  coconut tree appeared which is good because I can drink two types of water and I can use the coconut for a cup. So all I had was freshwater and lot and lots of coconut trees.


I need to get out of this island right now because I want to go home but I kind of want to stay here because i've just put in so much work. So I wrote down on the sand HELP. Then I got a found and went to find sone ink then just saw a bird it landed on the ground so I threw and rock at the bird and it couldn’t fly. I took the ink and put it on the HELP.

It's been 6 year I have forgot how a helicopter work I and already have a family which were coconut. Then a strange big boat it was the navy they forced me to go on that big weird boat. At last I got back home it looked so strange there were these weird thing called lights all you need to do is just switch it up and down. I need to do a lot of catching up.


How to make Milo



Task Description: I wrote a set instructions to make a milo.  

Tuesday, 9 May 2017

Fishing Time

Walt: think critically about what we read.



Task description : we all have to write about how a lures work.


Friday, 5 May 2017

Tuesday, 2 May 2017

Immersion Assembly


Walt: using exciting language


Our school topic is Now That's Thinking. All of us found that at assembly and  how chrome books
Are changed from the first one and now. Everybody got to know what the others team are do in the school.


As I said our school topic was Now that thinking. Team one two and three are looking forward to make amazing kites. Team 5 is doing something about fixing and how to make that school so much better.


Our team is looking forward to how Maori people use their technology and how people use technology now.  
The movie was how the teacher went back through time and research to find a band new topic.  It was kind of like traveling through time.


I am hoping that we are learning how the Maori people build their houses and and beds. What I really really want to learn about is how the Maori people cook their food. I am so excited.

I think the the new term topic overall is a great year. Because everybody are do something different.

task description : We are try to make our stroy intrasting

Tuesday, 11 April 2017

Friday, 7 April 2017

Eating Bugs



Walt: write narrative using descriptive language.
Have you ever ate bugs before? Well I have It was really gross. On thursday me and my class had to eat dead crickets with mud. First we had to get into a group and I was with Deavay, Justice, Hopa, Arthur and Lepa. Our teacher on thursday was Mrs Stickland

Mrs stickland game the groups a napkin with crickets with mud and we all had to eat one or more if we wanted to. I ate four crickets and it tasted like Burnt toast but really old. I never wanted to eat another dead cricket with mud.

In the end Mrs Stickland took the napkins with crickets and mud and put it in a bucket. Just incase we needed to throw up she had a bucket ready but it had a crack in the bottom. I felt scared eating the crickets. The crickets were so yuck Lepa cried on his first one.

Wednesday, 5 April 2017

The Flawed Fly



Walt: make connections across multiple texts.



This spider is the flaw fly.
It pretends to be a fly but it's not.
It’s back cracks open it half and it goes next to the fly and eats it up.
It is very bad what ever it see it trys to kill it.



Thursday, 23 March 2017

Rounding



Walt: Round up numbers

Mosquito

Walt: use intresting vocabulary
    Mosquito


Mosquito are annoying bugs they suck your blood and make you have itchy bites. They go from person to person sucking blood which can spread diseases.
This tiny stinging insect can even kill people and animals.


Task Description: WE have to describe a bug and write about it.Image result for Mosquito

Wednesday, 22 March 2017

Wednesday, 15 March 2017

Problem Solving week 2

Camp

Have you ever been on the year 5&6 camp. Well in 2017 in term 1 all the year 5&6 student went on camp. It Was Fun!

The year 5&6 camp is a camp where everybody has fun and do activities. It is in Pt England school on the field. The activities are get lost which is like the amazing race, youth town kayaking, swimming and killer zone 9(which is not violent )there is so many I can’t list them all.
The amazing thing is that we got our own tent and get to tent with someone.

My highlight of the camp was the swimming in the pool. You might think why well at the last the of camp we all go to the mangere pools. There are bombing pool side and a regular one.

The swimming pool were my favourite because it was my last last so I had to get much as fun as I can. To bad that we didn’t get to use the showers.   

I want to thank the parents the spent a lot of money just for camp and the teachers for helping too. Thank you mum for letting me go to camp even though you pay $70. Thank you Mr Brut for set this camp for the year 5&6 it was awesome.

In camp I learned that it was my last year in camp. The real thing that I learn in camp was kayaking. If you are a year 4 when you tune in to a year 5 you should try it.   

Tuesday, 7 March 2017

Camp

On camp I am looking forward to the new swimming pool that we are go to in camp.
I am also looking forward in what tent I am in because last time I was with someone who wasn’t my friend. The thing that I am really looking forward to is the pools.


I am hoping that there might be new game to play. What I am also hoping for is that I can sleep with my friend because last time I sleep with someone who wasn’t my friend. Another thing that I am hoping for is that We get to go kayaking because we didn’t get to go and we had to go on a another day.  

I am nervous about the rain because last we had to sleep in the library. I am also nervous about the tents last time my tent broke down little bit and there was water all over the floor. I am nervous if camp was canceled.


Wednesday, 22 February 2017

The lame race

WALT: learn to write recounts

Have you you ever had a race on the field before. Well that what our class did I it was lame. Very Lame!


Everybody went outside and outside and putted on heir shoes but some didn’t even bother. "We mast walk quietly past the class,' said Mr Goodwin said.Then we all walk quietly past the classrooms and went on the field. Mr Goodwin say we all had to run all the way to rugby post and come back ‘What,’ I said to myself.


Mr Goodwin say that we had to be quiet because there are other class and we don't want to bother them. Now I am feeling nervous now we have to run quietly. So Mr Goodwin say we all had to line up on the gold post


So everybody lined up on the field I think this is going to be quite fun “Go!!,’ Mr Goodwin shouted out. I wasn’t even ready. Everybody ran fast as they could I didn’t go my fast and I past still some people. At last we finish and drank some water.

That was one of the worst day of my life but crazy. Real Crazy!!

Task Description: today we did some thing lame and had write it

Paper Tower


Walt: write a recount about our experience.


Have you ever build a TOWER!! Out of newspaper? Well our class our class did. We had to build a tower out of newspaper it was hard. VERY HARD!!!


Our teacher was telling us the instruction. When everybody was listened but wasn't pay attention, the only thing I listened to was the video. Mr Goodwin say that the tower was not to lean on anything, after everybody got into groups I was with Lepa, Deavay, Justice, and Hopa. It’s TIME TO BUILD!!! + plan.


It was time to plan Mr goodwin gave us a paper and a pencil Deavay was the pencil guy. When we were plan we had two plan plan A and plan B. Plan A was rolling up the paper and putting it together but when it len we will put some more new paper on the side . Plan B was stacking them together.


So it was time to build Mr Goodwin gave us some tape, we started off with plan A. We were going to tape the tower because Mr Goodwin say nothing about taping it no the ground. The tower cape falling and falling then after time was up nobody's tower stood up so Mr Goodwin gave us two more minutes then after justice just putting one more tape and it STANDED!!!


So I learn that build a tower is not just about height it about it make sure the tower stands But at last our team won. Our prize was GLORY!!!!  Next time I will like to do this again.

Task Dec

Wednesday, 15 February 2017

Chicken flavoured worms


Walt: write quality introductions.

Have ever had chicken noodles? Well Have you ever ate chicken worms? I didn’t think so.
Well our teacher is crazy, because he fed us crazy chicken favored worms.
Well I didn’t expected this

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Introduction Rubric

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Hook
My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.t
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation
My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
My audience is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.


Task Description: In this lesson we did a writing experience to do with eating chicken flavoured noodles, and pretending they were worms.

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