Narrative Ruubric

Animal Racing

Once in Pt England School there was an epic event named the Pt England school animal race. People were being Rats, birds, and Cheetahs but I brought my pet Mewtwo. I bought Mewtwo because he is a very fast pokemon me and him would win on-one could bet us we’re the fastest in the world.

Then suddenly there was a guy he had a Ninjask ‘‘What!,’’. People say that his name is THE MAN

The race was nearly starting ‘‘ On your mark .. Get set.. GO!! Everybody blast I was in last but I was slowly catching up. I was in 2nd place but that guy named THE MAN was still in 1st place then suddenly THE MAN splashed mud in our face’s everyone past me ZOOM! Everyone finished and I came last what a sad day that was for me next time I am not going to race ever again.

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.  

WALT: write a recount.

In the morning I ran to class and thought to myself, I wonder what will be doing this tern.

Suddenly I look at the wall I think we are going to learn about the Olympics.

Team 4 is going to learn what supposed to happen and what not supposed to happen. Also team 4 is going to a whole bunch of the

Olympic.   

Team 4 is going to learn about Olympic Expose.

I’m looking forwards to sport.

MOTAT

ON tusday the year 4 &  5 went to motat. Everyone had lots of fun. But most one got hurt

THE LITTLE BOAT

It cold day there was a boat in the middle of nowhere. The everything was silent the sea was calm the fish under the sea were swimming silently. In the boat there were two mens their names were Mark and Goob. They were very best friends they always like to play together and have fun. But when they grew up they thought of going fishing out in the sea to go fish and that was when they got stuck in the middle of nowhere.

Goob and Mark wanted to get out of the sea they were bored and wish that they never went fish because all the had to eat was raw fish and sea water. Suddenly they heard something under the sea could it be a shark or a jelly fish maybe a whale. SNAP went the shark biting the boat in half Goob and Mark jumped out of the boat were swimming fast as they can for land. Mark for land it was a deserted island it has two coconut trees that made an X like a treasure map.   

Goob and Mark dag a hole with their hands there was a treasure box Mark opened it there was heap of gold. Goob and Mark were jumping for joy they were so happy they forgot about how to get back to there house but luckily there was a helicopter to save them and

EVERYONE LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER   ll=l)   

                      

DEIT COKE BOTTLE EXPERIMENTS

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